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Post by Elle on Apr 17, 2006 21:05:12 GMT 2
When You Smile...
I gaze aimlessly across the room. I stare at random things: a book my chair or even a broom.
My eyes land on you, immersed in a book, you don't seem to notice me. But soon I find that it just wasn't meant to be.
You look up right at me and your lips form a gentle smile. Then I forget everythhing else for a while. You're all I can see and I feel myself smile back.
I let out my breath and start to relax.
You have special smiles, yes more than one. You smile when you think and when you have fun. But my favorite smile is the one just for me. It's different than others and it's something I love to see.
Because sometimes just for a second when I'm not thinking right, my mind gets all fuzzy and so does my sight. Just for a moment when I can't really see, I swear that you are really in love with me.
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Post by Nat on Apr 19, 2006 5:38:29 GMT 2
Awwww Elle I love that last one! And candy yours was really good to! Hey Elle, you mind if I use you poem for a story on HP, that last one?? I swear if you give me your screen names and junk I'll make sure to give you all the credit!!!!!! You dont have to, just wondering...
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Post by Elle on Apr 19, 2006 12:55:27 GMT 2
That's fine. R u using it on HP.com or what? My screen name is hermioneaplus on there. I'm so glad you like it. I write a lot of poems in my spare time.. elle
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Post by Elle on Apr 19, 2006 12:57:53 GMT 2
Here's another...
Close Your Eyes and Count to Ten…
Close your eyes and count to ten, Maybe things will be right again. No more trouble, no more fears, No more sadness, no more tears.
Hiding from the world around you, running from the problems that surround you.
You cry inside you, but you never let it show, people pass right by, it’s like they don’t even know.
Your world is falling apart, and it’s tearing out your heart. You say, “Please let me be dreaming! Let this all just be a lie!”
You could be dreaming, you never know, but please just tell me this, If you are dreaming, and this is all bad luck, why don’t you just wake up?
It's not that great but i think a lot of people can relate to it.
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 1:16:25 GMT 2
Thanx Elle... I'll post sopme more poems of mine 2night! Yea on HP, and I like the count to ten!
Hey Elle... Q: With your poems do you have some sort of form or is it free form, cause I notice you don't rhyme alot, and if you notice and take time to look, you'l see alot of mine rhyme!
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 1:18:02 GMT 2
Tears He’s Made Me Cry
Why did I go and fall for the guy Who makes me laugh, makes me cry Who doesn’t truly know what he wants And gives me a natural high
Why did I go and let him kiss me I knew he’d never truly miss the So why does it feel like he still Holds my hearts true key
I remember the feel… Of his lips on my cheek The way his whisper Makes my knees go weak
The feel of his hand As it softly holds mine I hate this feeling Like I’m waiting in line
I’m at the very end His very last choice I wonder what happened What happened to my voice
If I could tell him How angry I am That I’ve waited and waited And still no plan
I’ll never stop loving him But he’ll never understand The way that I feel Buried in the sand
Choking on death Breathing in grit I don’t want to love him I just can’t take it
He makes me so mad But with the greatest of ease He makes me love him again Though he’s just a tease
I wish he’d move away Die of disease But I don’t want to lose him Oh, god, no please
Just make the feelings Go away, go away Don’t come back Another day
I remember when we first met I didn’t really like him, neither did my friends But that is definitely not Where my story ends
Somewhere in those Mixed up years, I must have changed my mind And started to gain feelings For the boy who was never kind
He once called me ugly A true insult in my head When I went home I felt I wanted to be dead
I cried tears of heartache, cried tears of pain Tears that I still shed Every night, when I go to sleep And lay down in my bed
What sucks about this poem is it's completley true, as alot of my poems are based off of soemthing in my life. I've liked this guy for years, and it FEELS like he likes me back, but... I dont know, as the poem says, he doesnt know WHAT he wants... and... yeah
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 1:18:49 GMT 2
This one isn't by me its by my friend Chelsea, but I love it! Sooo...
Never, Forever, and Tears I Cry
Never say “I love you.” If you don’t really care Never talk about feelings If they aren’t really there
Never hold my hand If you plan to break my heart Never say your going to If you don’t plan to start
Never look into my eyes If all you do is lie Never say hello If you really mean goodbye
If you really mean forever Then say you’ll try But never say forever Because forever makes me cry
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 1:20:58 GMT 2
When people talk of love They never talk of pain But I’ll never forget The memory of me standing in the rain
You said you’d come And always be there Be noble, protective, Always care
Darkness surrounds As I wait on the road’ A car passes by, the headlights Shimmer and glow
When people talk of love They never talk of hurt People burned emotionally Treated like dirt
You said a lot of things Held me tight I’ll never forget you reasoning for abandoning me that night
You said you’d been busy Homework, chores, and friends You left me wordless, nothing to say All you wanted was a way to cleanse
When people talk of love They talk of pleasure Saying no other feeling in the world could ever measure
I look at you and say were doomed You reply with “Were not finished, we just have to try!” I look at you with sadness Say my goodbyes
When people talk of love They never talk of us For to say love is painful Would make quite a fuss
Now, when I see lovers meet I try not to think 'their doomed' I was once a believer of fairytale romance I never used to think of it as a wound
I try to be happy To not be so stressed But the world of hatred around me Causes me to be depressed
This ones called Talking of love, and it doesnt really resemble anything thats happened to me physically, but it does mirror allot of things in my life...
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 1:22:32 GMT 2
www.freewebs.com/lost_soul_123/index.htmThats my website by the way, if ya'll wanna check it out! Its got a few poems a blog and a reall;y AWESOME cursor, lol, its not done yet, its a work in progress as are alot of things!
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Post by Nat on Apr 20, 2006 23:34:11 GMT 2
I heart you... You heart me... lalalalala... family
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