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My blanky flew over the ocean... My blanky flew over the sea...
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Post by Nat on Apr 2, 2006 22:38:03 GMT 2
To keep it all inside Is very very bad and to lock up all your feelings Is truly very sad
Read some poetry Pick up a pencil and write for surely writing poetry will keep you up all night
I know because I write it to it rhymes and twists and turns And when I read it over My heart starts to burn
I've been told my poetry Flows and keeps you reading It talks of death and pain and heartbreak its sure to keep you needing
So if you want to join to see if you can write enchanting poems that keep you up all night
If you want to join Have alot of fun Join if you can the legacy has begun
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Post by Breezy on Apr 2, 2006 23:02:06 GMT 2
Ooooh. Cool. I write poetry, too. :]
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Post by Nat on Apr 2, 2006 23:10:33 GMT 2
lol... Cool! Post somethin if you want I'm gonna post another...!
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Post by Nat on Apr 2, 2006 23:14:11 GMT 2
Tears He’s Made Me Cry
Why did I go and fall for the guy Who makes me laugh, makes me cry Who doesn’t truly know what he wants And gives me a natural high
Why did I go and let him kiss me I knew he’d never truly miss the So why does it feel like he still Holds my hearts true key
I remember the feel… Of his lips on my cheek The way his whisper Makes my knees go weak
The feel of his hand As it softly holds mine I hate this feeling Like I’m waiting in line
I’m at the very end His very last choice I wonder what happened What happened to my voice
If I could tell him How angry I am That I’ve waited and waited And still no plan
I’ll never stop loving him But he’ll never understand The way that I feel Buried in the sand
Choking on death Breathing in grit I don’t want to love him I just can’t take it
He makes me so mad But with the greatest of ease He makes me love him again Though he’s just a tease
I wish he’d move away Die of disease But I don’t want to lose him Oh, god, no please
Just make the feelings Go away, go away Don’t come back Another day
I remember when we first met I didn’t really like him, neither did my friends But that is definitely not Where my story ends
Somewhere in those Mixed up years, I must have changed my mind And started to gain feelings For the boy who was never kind
He once called me ugly A true insult in my head When I went home I felt I wanted to be dead
I cried tears of heartache, cried tears of pain Tears that I still shed Every night, when I go to sleep And lay down in my bed
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Post by Nat on Apr 4, 2006 3:49:23 GMT 2
bumpz, anyone?
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Post by Lizzie (SmiLiza) on Apr 4, 2006 13:07:21 GMT 2
Coll! I'll write one too. I'll post it later when I get back. I'm out now!
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Post by Nat on Apr 8, 2006 0:13:49 GMT 2
BuMp! Obviously no one likes to write poetry,
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Post by Candy on Apr 9, 2006 15:57:59 GMT 2
I do... but mine truly sucks! Here's one.... it's about an old Shetland pony I used to know! BUMPS for yours by the way! When red roses turn grey, That will be the day That I wont need you When rain isnt wet And the sun doesnt set Is when you wont be number one When tiny hooves dont trot on this grass When you dont spook when cars zoom past Is when your glint will leave MY eye When silly movements dont amuse me Caked dirt that my brush doesnt see Is when I wont care about you In other words I cant forget you Never will not love you You are my best friend, To me you are true What would I do without you?
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Post by Gigi/G.G.(Jianna) on Apr 9, 2006 16:16:26 GMT 2
She's letting Destiny neigh down there!
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Post by Elle on Apr 17, 2006 20:57:31 GMT 2
Great poems! Check mine out. I'm sorry if it stinks.
Sometimes
Somtimes you make me laugh. Sometimes you make me cry. Sometimes you're so annoying you're like a bug in my eye!
Sometimes I feel wanted Sometimes I feel so lost Sometimes I feel I have no one to trust
But you're always there and in the end you'll still be my best friend.
I long to feel wanted, and I'll take the bug in the eye, as long as you promise to never make me cry...
Elle
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