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Post by layz on Feb 12, 2006 6:17:03 GMT 2
OMG!
I love that song!
-claps-
It was very well written.
haha.
I forgot what a Treacle Tart was...lol
BUMPS!
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Post by Elle on Feb 14, 2006 23:35:51 GMT 2
Glad you like it! elle
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 15, 2006 12:36:18 GMT 2
yeah - i lurved it!! *huggles layz* and i loved yours too!! sorry i couldnt read it sooner!! ;D
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Post by Elle on Feb 16, 2006 4:01:20 GMT 2
YEAH TWO PEOPLE LIKE MY SONG FIC! elle
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 18, 2006 11:27:01 GMT 2
"Ever The Same" by Rob Thomas
The fire glowed dim, throwing deep shadows on the Heads' commonroom. At first glance, the cosy room seemed empty but closer inspection revealed a huddled pair in one of the single armchairs next to the fire.
We were drawn from the weeds We were brave like soldiers Falling down under the pale moonlight
Lily lay curled tightly into James' muscular chest. Her green eyes, now puffy and red, were closed in weary sleep. James brushed the stray strands of Lily's auburn hair from her face. Tenderly he pressed his cool hands to her hot face and neck as scenes from the previous night flashed through his mind.
You were holding to me Like a someone broken And I couldn't tell you but I'm telling you now
James lightly kissed her cherry red lips and her eyes fluttered open. "James?" she murmured, shifting her position to see him better. "Lily," he replied just as softly, but he was unable to take the sad tone out of his voice. Her face crumpled and she tried to sit up, and James knew that she too was remembering.
Just let me hold you while you're falling apart Just let me hold you and we'll both fall down
"Let me go James," Lily said, but James knew she didnt mean it. He shook his head firmly and tightened his grip round her slender waist. Tears clung to her eyelashes and small rivulets ran down her porcelain cheeks as she shook her head hopelessly. "I dont want to be hurt anymore! Just let me go!" she sobbed and James pulled her back into his tight embrace.
Fall on me Tell me everything you want me to be Forever with you forever in me Ever the same
"Leaving me is not going to make any of the hurt go away Lily!" he was now crying too. Lily gave in and clung to him - her face buried in his chest, listening to the steady beat of his heart; it had always comforted her to know that he was human too. "I-I dont know what to-o do anym-more Lily," he choked. "What can I do to con-convince you that I'm yours?"
We would stand in the wind We were free like water Flowing down Under the warmth of the sun
Lily's weeping had stopped in the shock of what she was hearing - was James Potter asking for help? His grip shifted to her small hands and she stared into his greif-stricken face as he spoke. "D-dont you remember? We were perfect for each other - you s-said it yourself. I'd give you anything you ask for... n-no matter what."
Now it's cold and we're scared And we've both been shaken Hey, look at us Man, this doesn't need to be the end
Their eyes were locked and James still continued, more confident now. "Why does anything have to be any different now? What's changed? I dont know about you, but if I was to die tomorrow I'd rather die with your love than without it."
Just let me hold you while you're falling apart Just let me hold you and we'll both fall down
"James," she whispered, "I-I dont know what to say." James smiled - his famous crooked Potter grin. "All I've ever asked you to say," he replied, "is what you want me to do."
Fall on me tell me everything you want me to be Forever with you Forever in me Ever the same
He waited expectantly, knowing it was coming any second now - first the delicate pink blush, then the shy look and finally - "Will you kiss me James?" - and he took no time to answer, just lightly brushed his lips on her neck, moving agonisingly slowly but surely to her smiling mouth.
Call on me I'll be there for you and you'll be there for me Forever it's you Forever in me Ever the same
She responded passionately, and Lily no longer held any doubts about how she would spend the rest of her life. James pulled back slowly and grinned mischievously at Lily's disappointed look. "I love you Lily Evans," he said, not like in times of old but with fierce sincerity that left no room for misunderstanding, "and I want you to know that no matter what happens, I will always be there to fight for you. There is no way that anything bad will ever happen to you unless I'm no longer here."
You may need me there To carry all your weight But you're no burden I assure You tide me over With a warmth I'll not forget But I can only give you love
The earnest tone in his voice eliminated any reservations she may have once had. His warm smile and cool caressing touch were soothing and she again she found her arms wrapped around his neck, hands tangled in his already messy jet black hair.
Fall on me tell me everything you want me to be Forever with you Forever in me Ever the same
They broke apart again and Lily rested her head over his heart to listen to it's steady hum. "Breakfast will be nearly finished by now," Lily comented. "We should really get a move on to class." James' eyebrows shot up and he smiled down at her coyly. "Are you serious?!" he chuckled and nibbled her ear, "I can think of plenty of things I'd rather do." "Well... we are the Heads - James stop it!"
Call on me I'll be there for you and you'll be there for me Forever it's you Forever in me Ever the same
"I'm sorry," he said and leveled her eyes to his. "Considering the circumstances, I think they'll forgive us one day off - if they thought you were still too distraught to go to class." Lily shook her head. "James Harry Potter, I cant believe you would twist a situation like that to your personal benifit!" James grinned again and winked. "You cant?"
Forever with you Forever in me Ever the same(Ever the same)
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Post by Elle on Feb 18, 2006 19:56:44 GMT 2
OMIGOSH! LOVE IT MUFFY! I ABSOLUTLY ADORE THAT SONG! I never even thought of making it a LIly/James fic but it was great! elle
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Post by layz on Feb 18, 2006 20:05:17 GMT 2
OMGGGGODDDDD!
MUFFY!!!
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
OMGGAWWDDDD!
IT'S SO CUTE!!!
scenes from the previous night
Ummm... Hehe. Errrrr....
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 19, 2006 12:38:42 GMT 2
lol.... i didnt mean that in that way!! she just found out that her parents died a couple of days before and she'd been sulking since. then 'the previous night' James confronted her about how she had fallen to bits and was trying to get her to let him help her through it - but she got angry..... and yeah you get the idea!! i just lurve that song too!! and i was wanting to do a James and Lily fic - so i thought it miht go alright!! ;D i wanna read some more!!!
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Post by layz on Feb 19, 2006 20:09:21 GMT 2
Awww.
Her parents died.
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I WANT TO READ MORE!
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Post by Issa (Luisa) on Feb 19, 2006 21:27:35 GMT 2
I LURVED ALL OF 'EM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Lils! weird how song-fics always end up as romance fics. lol! Love y'all fics, BUMS!!!, your job thinker of-er, Luisa Ps. BUMSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
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