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Post by Joie on Feb 2, 2006 9:10:05 GMT 2
here's the deal... i may not give BUMPS onto your fics but always remember that i read them... i just do not have a sigle second to click onto the reply button and type BUMP! haha!...anyway, you know how much i adore your ficcys so i will totally read them although i do not give BUMPS!...kay!... and i'm posting my fic here soon when i'm not busy anymore...lol!... lurve yah and your fics!... ;D and yeah, i'ma post a songfic, too...just thinking of a nice song...hehehe...
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 3, 2006 11:38:46 GMT 2
hmmmmmmm......... no newies!! might do another one myself later!! if i get time that is!! ;D
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 4, 2006 4:27:45 GMT 2
this too is not HP, its a personal one..... but yeah, sorta made it up on the spot UNDERNEATH THIS SMILE Hilary Duff What I'm standing on is sinking in And I don't have a clue how to get off of itI now stare at you shamelessly. I don't care what you think of me any more - you're leaving. But when I look at you there is hope It's like you see the sadness in my eyesI just cant help it. Believe me - if i could get rid of my feelings for you then they'd've been gone two years ago....... the day you found out You read the blue between the lines You could be the one to hold me when I wanna cryI really do cry at night. I know that I can never have you - particularly when she's around. I can't help that you love my cousin more than me...... I can't help but try to tell you in my own way. Underneath this smile My world is slowly caving inI just sit and watch. I've been hurt too many times..... and once again my trust was betrayed. But you were different.... All the while I'm hanging on 'cause that is all I knowYou didnt pull away, you came closer. You didn't shun me - you took me in. Not as i would have liked...... because I love you, I see it now Could you be the one to save me from every bad habit that has helped me dig this hole I've been hiding out for milesBut its too late, you're gone, and I'm left to pick up the broken peices of my heart....... to deal with the daily pain of not seeing you everyday - though that hurt almost as much. Underneath this smileI never meant for it to happen.... but it did. You wouldnt beleive the hurt it caused me to see you with her, and now my cousin - what a blow, as if you'd notice if i did let it show. I have walked this earth with broken bones I've been keeping secrets under all these lights Keeping it to myself was the only way, and I wish I could tell you how I feel. I'm so beyond feeling that even the last wound of open rejection wouldn't be enough to kill my dead heart. But when you're around my defenses go You don't let me run away from youI go giddy, my head floats, and I pull myself in for fear that you'll discover just how bad I need you around. I suspect you already know - I know you see things i try to hide. You don't let me twist and turn the truth It feel as if I'm naked when you're standing in the roomTo tell you the truth - the word love isn't strong enough. Because somewhere in my love there is hate......... and anguish........ and longing............. and firm conviction that you'll never love me. Underneath this smile My world is slowly caving in All the while I'm hanging on instead of letting goWhen you left, my heart refused to believe it was true. I need to see, hear, smell, touch you everyday - and I still expected to see you there. Could you be the one to save me from every bad habit that has helped me dig this hole I've been hiding out for miles Underneath this smileYour presence eased the pain........ made me remember what I was suffering for.... but you'll never know Underneath this smile Oh yeahYou tease me, think its funny, pulling the strings of my dead and dieing heart... and i can only laugh back. Underneath this smile My world is slowly caving All the while I'm hanging on instead of letting goYou're an idiot - I know it. But with all your shortcomings and imperfections..... you are the dearest person I've ever met Could you be the one to save me from every bad habit that has helped me dig this hole I've been hiding out for miles Underneath this smileEven now - I still think of you in every moment of my life. I'm drowning........ and it feels good. I'm burning...... and the heat clears my head - the picture of you stuck in my mind through all pain Could you be the one to save me from every bad habit that has helped me dig this hole I've been hiding out for miles Underneath this... underneath this... underneath this smileI'm just a girl - standing in front of a boy - asking him to take good care of my heart. And if you broke it, i wouldn't mind. Even if you were to stab me, with my last gasping breath - I'd apologise for bleeding on your shirt........ What I'm standing on is sinking in........
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Post by Ashley on Feb 5, 2006 1:59:02 GMT 2
WoW! These are really cool. Lemme Try.
You had a dark, sexy vibe about ya When i first saw James...phew!And a strange way you turn me on That stupid arrogance! The way your look said a lot about ya as in, never seen a combAs if you really didn't give a-unh! rules? They're for mortals.. I told myself not to fall for you Yet still I did..'Cause I can see that you don't follow rules EVER! How the heck did you make head boy? I should've just walked away As I did a thousand times before..But your eyes were telling me to stay Those warm,hazel, puupy-dog eyes.. Damn, why do the wild ones turn me on Stupid, Stupid,Stupid!
It's like cherry pie, you can't deny it Or apple Driving fast, you had to try it Excuse me! He's the one who does 65 through a town! That's what it feels like Letting Tony touch you everywhere Tony who? Breaking rules and didn't care That's what it feels like How he feels all the damn time!
A real rebel kinda fella Definatley James! The kind that I would never trust Well, they do tend to be unreliable I could read what your mind was thinking 'God she's hot!' He's so predictable! It's like you still didn't give a-hey! Well, he doesn't...usually.. It's funny how those kind of guys Have a way of getting what they want You have no clue how funny.. And even good girls though they try It's if they just can't stay away I tried, but I'm telling you: It doesn't work!
Damn, why do the wild ones turn me on I just don't know why! It's like cherry pie, you can't deny it What if you're full? Driving fast, you had to try it Well, okay I did try it once.. That's what it feels like Letting Tony touch you everywhere That Tony freak again.. Breaking rules and didn't care That's what it feels like Well, I was sorta breaking rules, but I was Head Girl!
It's like cherry pie, you can't deny it Driving fast, you had to try it That's what it feels like Letting Tony touch you everywhere Breaking rules and didn't care That's what it feels like Young, stupid,everlasting love I can be your cherry pie And you can be my cream on top I can be your cherry pie And you can be my cream on top That actually sonds pretty good..Come on!
I can be your cherry pie And you can be my cream on top I can be your cherry pie And you can be my cream on top
It's like cherry pie, you can't deny it Driving fast, you had to try it That's what it feels like Letting Tony touch you everywhere Breaking rules and didn't care That's what it feels like
I love my loser...
Not really a song fic...more like Lily agreeing with every line of the song....I don't think I'm good at this..
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Post by layz on Feb 6, 2006 4:07:54 GMT 2
BUMPS!!
;D
These are really good!!!!
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Post by Her Evil Muffiness to you!! on Feb 6, 2006 12:00:34 GMT 2
you'll get better with practice!! but that was really good for a first try!!! ;D you could have changed tony to James......... modifying the song a little isnt against the rules is there anyone else??? i want to read some more!! ;D
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Post by layz on Feb 9, 2006 0:29:37 GMT 2
Collapsed – Ron&&Hermione
Hermione Granger touched the rough brick that marked her way to Diagon Ally
As she did, it appeared in front of her – dozens of families swarmed through.
She was pushing through the crowd, trying to find her boyfriend that had ran off before she could say anything.
Nathaniel Varvlett, the only person she had since the war between Harry Potter and Tom Marvolo Riddle.
Instead of her nuisance of a boyfriend in the crowd, she saw Ronald Weasley – her old friend from Hogwarts.
You were the one
She smiled at the thought of talking and laughing with him….like they used to do.
That I couldn’t find
Until she saw a beautiful, young, girl – by his side….
Hidden away
Hermione shrunk back, seeing as he was resting his arm around the girl’s shoulder.
In the depths of my mind…
“HERMIONE??! HERMIONE GRANGER??!!!!” Ron called out to Hermione, through the crowd.
“Ron…! I haven’t seen you in YEARS!!” Hermione faked a smile.
“You look amazing.” Ron’s eyes widened.
Why did I let you go, you’re too good to be true
“Ahem.” The girl coughed as if to get Ron’s attention.
I messed it up and now I don’t know what to do
“Eh… You remember Lavender Brown, from Hogwarts??
We ran in circles and wasted time
“Yes, I do…. Good to see you.” Hermione shook Lavender’s small hands.
From right to wrong, from right to wrong
Ron laughed, “We’re getting married in April.”
If I knew that you were mine
Hermione tightened her grip on Lavender’s hand.
I wouldn’t have wasted time
“Congratulations!” Hermione grinned uneasily, “I hope you have a lovely....wedding.”
I wish I could erase the past
Ron looked at his Rolex watch in shock, “Sorry, Hermione – We have to hurry to our shopping so we can actually HAVE a wedding.”
Now it’s all collapsed – in my lap
“Oh. Ok, then….” Hermione sighed.
I over thought
Lavender tugged at Ron’s arm and pulled at him.
So I locked up my heart – yeah
“Go ahead, I’m going to stay for a while longer. I’ll meet you there.” Ron whispered to Lavender.
There you stood
Hermione smiled and shifted her feet around nervously.
You blue eyes hidden beneath your hood
“Hermione, would you like to…come to….the…wedding? As a guest or something?” Ron stuttered.
Why did I let you go, you’re too good to be true
Hermione nodded and took the handed invitation with the address and phone number for the wedding.
I messed it up and now I don’t know what to do
“See you there, Hermione Granger.”
We ran in circles and wasted time
Hermione smiled and slowly walked to the nearest store.
From right to wrong, from right to wrong
“Something’s better than nothing.” Hermione silently cried.
If I knew that you were mine I wouldn’t have wasted time I wish I could erase the past
A week passed and Hermione Granger was sitting in the front row of Ronald Weasley and Lavender Brown’s wedding ceremony.
Now it’s all collapsed – in my lap
“Do you, Lavender Brown, take thee, Ronald Weasley, to be your lawful, wedded, husband?” The speaker asked.
My mind is blank just like a clean slate
“I do.” Lavender giggled.
Will I meet another guy the same blue eyes
“And do you, Ronald Weasley, take thee, Lavender Brown, to be your lovely, wedded, wife?” The speaker asked again.
And the same name, with the Converse shoes I gave
Silence rose upon Ron’s lips, everyone’s eyes widened.
Will he have the same laugh
“I don’t.”
Wear my homemade hat
Gasps came from the crowd as the words escaped Ron’s mouth.
Bet I’ll make another mistake
Lavender fainted and family members surrounded her.
And think he’s just another fake
Ron walked over to Hermione Granger, silent as she sat in her seat.
Wish I could….erase the past now
Ron bent down on one knee and took out a red, velvet, box.
Wish I could….bring you back
“Hermione Granger…Will you marry me?”
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Post by layz on Feb 9, 2006 23:39:48 GMT 2
I wrote one.... bumps? BUMPS!
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Post by layz on Feb 11, 2006 4:40:40 GMT 2
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Post by Elle on Feb 12, 2006 5:58:15 GMT 2
Ron Weasley had been awake for hours, watching his angel as she slept, occasionally he would brush a strand of her bushy hair away from her face or stroke her cheek with his thumb. He really couldn’t believe that the love of his life was laying here in his four-poster bed with him.
The dawn is breaking A light shining through You're barely waking And I'm tangled up in you
Last night, they had had a fiery row, she had accused him of being “an insensitive prat that couldn’t see what was right in front of him” after he had come into the common room moaning about not being able to find a date for the Seventh Year Ball. Being the Red Head he was he snapped right back at her for being too nosy, but little did she know that Ron didn’t want to argue, he hated when they weren’t speaking to each other, but what he hated most was when she was upset. Which meant she wasn’t smiling. God, he loved her smile…
I'm open, you're closed Where I follow, you'll go I worry I won't see your face Light up again
He had apologized immediately when he saw her face crumple, but when she sank to the floor crying he ran to her side and held her in his arms.
Even the best fall down sometimes Even the wrong words seem to rhyme Out of the doubt that fills my mind I somehow find You and I collide
She had sobbed into his shoulder and he was stunned when he heard her whisper, “ Why couldn’t you have just asked me? You should know by now that I love you.”
I'm quiet you know You make a first impression I've found I'm scared to know I'm always on your mind
When he had looked down at her she gave a dry laugh, “I should’ve known that you would never like me when you could have someone brilliantly beautiful like Lavender or Pavarti. I’m nothing compared to them.”
Even the best fall down sometimes even the stars refuse to shine Out of the back you fall in time I somehow find you and I collide
Ron leaned down next to her ear, “You should know by now, that I love you more than anything, including Chocolate Frogs, The Chudley Cannons, and Treacle Tart.” He picked her up, much to her surprise and said, “Come with me. I have something to show you.”
Even the best fall down sometimes Even the wrong words seem to rhyme Out of the doubt that fills your mind You finally find You and I collide
Ron took her to his dormitory and sat her down on the bed, he reached into his nightstand and pulled out a photo album, he flipped through the pages, they were all filled with pictures of them together, “ See? I have always loved you. And even though it killed me, I let you find your way to me. It took seven long years but I think that you’ve finally found me. What do you think?” To answer his question Hermione threw her arms around him and kissed him. “ Does that answer it?” She settled onto his chest and began flipping through the pages again. Ron smiled at her, “ Yes, I think it does…”
You finally find you and I collide You finally find You and I collide
THIS IS MY FIRST SONG FIC....THE SONG IS COLLIDE BY HOWIE DAY...WHAT DO YOU THINK OF IT? PLEASE BE HONEST! elle
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